Weekend Warriors 2

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From my current work in process.

In this scene the prisoner Kainan is threatened by my Hero. This scene is written in present tense to indicate the strangeness that Kai is experiencing as his body has been bonded to another entity to create a sentient zombie like creature called a revenant.

  Cade’s chest swells, his lips peel back from fangs that have grown long and sharp. Kai swallows and holds himself still. It is hard not to flinch or to lash out with his unrestrained fist. Those big fangs are poised over his throat ready to strike, Cade’s breath huffs against his skin. If Cade thinks he isn’t sincere in his surrender or if the bonding instinct is riding the big vampire too hard then Kai’s in a shitload of trouble.

He clenches his teeth so hard it feels like his jaw bone will snap. Waiting for Cade to strike is a special kind of hell, but he supposes it’s nothing less than he deserves.

“Cade, you need to back the fuck off. Now,” Matthias says.

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6 thoughts on “Weekend Warriors 2

  1. intense. your 8 left me curious as to what’s going on and what will happen next.

  2. Millie Burns says:

    I’d like to know why he feels like he deserves this…your eight have me wondering.

  3. S.J. Maylee says:

    I love all the tension and your great descriptions. Fab snippet.

  4. I’m wondering what will happen too (and glad Mathias is telling him to back off).

  5. Oups the interruption, I wonder what Cade will do now.

  6. eviejayne says:

    Thanks everyone for the encouraging comments. You have no idea how much I enjoy them.

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