Weekend Warriors.



Another snippit from the work I currently have submitted, Black Aggie.

Raph strode up the shallow steps and rapped on the glass paned door. A silhouette appeared an instant before the door swung open. Raph took a step back. Holy shit.

Trouble, big fucking trouble. From the top of her sun-bleached auburn curls to the tip of her bare toes. The woman who answered the door was trouble with a capital T.

β€œCan I help you?” she asked in a raspy, bedroom voice.

Oh shit, oh shit. Her eyes were the yellow green of sunshine through through a glass of 110 proof chartreuse and they stole the breath from his lungs.

12 thoughts on “Weekend Warriors.

  1. Ed Hoornaert says:

    The woman sounds a wee bit sexy. Just a little, you know?

  2. Yup, she sounds like trouble, but what is she capable of, I wonder? πŸ˜‰

  3. Loved the use of color in the snippet! Your narrator does sound overwhelmed πŸ™‚

  4. I can’t wait to see her reaction to him!

  5. Allyson says:

    I can’t wait to find out more!

  6. nancygideon says:

    WOW! Nice impact. Very visceral.

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