Weekend Warriors

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A little more from my current WIP, Sundown and Sorrow.

But really? What did just happen? Not something she was willing to look at, that’s for sure. She followed them down the narrow stairs, trying very hard not to notice the way his dark hair curled around his nape. Was she attracted to Gabe’s baby bother? No way. Except she was having a hard time keeping her eyes off his broad shoulders and narrow hips. Jesus his ass looked good in those jeans. Okay so maybe she was a bit attracted to him, hell there was a lot to like. It’s not like she could do anything about it even if he hadn’t been Gabe’s kid brother

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4 thoughts on “Weekend Warriors

  1. Ed Hoornaert says:

    The internal conflict makes this snippet sizzle. Good job.

  2. I think you really show her internal struggle over this guy very well – great snippet!

  3. Eleri Stone says:

    I think the answer is, “YES.” Baby brother doesn’t sound like so much of a baby.

  4. I vote that she’s very attracted to him, loved her internal debate with herself, while she’s taking note of all his good points. Well done snippet!

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