Weekend Warriors.

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These are the opening lines from a new horror/urban fantasy I’m writing. This is not my hero, but the first murder victim that triggers the story.

Daylight fades the evening darkness falls

Dave had always had a thing for Asian women. Like the petite beauty walking beside him. Man, she was a stunner, way out of his league. Tiny, childlike body swaying gently at his side. Pale shapely legs, bared beneath a short, flared skirt and long dark hair hanging in a thick ponytail down her spine. A schoolgirl fantasy made flesh. Why she’d picked him out at the bar was beyond him. He wasn’t anything special. A forty something, slightly tubby, slightly balding desk jockey.

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6 thoughts on “Weekend Warriors.

  1. Ed Hoornaert says:

    My sons could identify. The oldest has been with his girlfriend from Hong Kong for 9 years. The middle son’s last girlfriend was Japanese. The youngest was involved with a Japanese-Ukrainian-Canadian girl.

  2. Lorien Lyn says:

    Intriguing intro. I liked the villain’s POV.

  3. Cara Bristol says:

    Is he the villain or the murder victim?

  4. Ahhh, stupid guy. If it seems too good to be true, it probably is, right?? He’ll pay dearly…

    Good beginning, Evie. 🙂

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