Last week I gave you the opening lines of a new work in progress. I’ve decided to put the entire first chapter up over the next while. This is from Slit Mouth, Sentinels book 2. The first in the series, Black Aggie, has been accepted by Totally Entwined Group. I’ll let you know when it’s up for sale.
So here is paragraph two.
Dave fingered his ring finger, still not used to the missing wedding band, although the divorce had been finalized last week. If only his cheating ex wife, Sarah, could see him now. Screw her and her muscled gym instructor. That bastard didn’t have a patch on his sweet little geisha. He may have had a body any man would envy, but with those ears he gave Dumbo a run for his money. This Asian beauty was flawless. A wet dream on legs, sex on a stick. What had she said her name was again? Onna, wasn’t it? Man he couldn’t wait to be on her. Dave smiled at his private joke.
eviejayne 
Revenge is sweet . . .
Evie, it reminds me of what a friend of mine was once told after a break up. “The best way to get over a man is to get under a man”
I suspect there’s trouble ahead for this guy, though. 🙂
I hope this guy isn’t the hero, because I don’t really like him. Too crude.
That’s good, I was trying to make him unlikable. He’s my first murder victim and I didn’t want the readers to feel too bad when he gets killed.
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