Weekend Writing Warriors.



I’m putting up the  whole first draft of chapter one of my current WIP, Slit Mouth, piece by piece. Links to the earlier paragraphs are at the bottom of the post.

Shit, he should have offered her his jacket. The night wasn’t cold, but she wasn’t wearing much. Too late now. They’d reached his apartment building. It would have been great to take her to a real home. Forty something and living in a bachelors flat wasn’t a great look, but bitch face Sarah and the gym bunny were living in his house. A flash of rage rushed through is blood. His house. The house he’d worked his ass off to pay for while Sarah ground her skinny hips against the gym bunny’s pelvis. He clenched his jaw so hard he thought his teeth would break.

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

4 thoughts on “Weekend Writing Warriors.

  1. Ed Hoornaert says:

    I’m not sure, but I think maybe I sense a teensy bit of hostility toward his ex-wife. I’m probably wrong, though. 😉

  2. Cara Bristol says:

    I sense a little anger there. Lol.

  3. His emotions come through clearly all right!

  4. eviejayne says:

    […] Part 4 […]

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